Looks good. I wonder about the first sentence, "This document describes how the Zone Identifier of an IPv6 scoped address can be represented in a Uniform Resource Identifier that includes a literal IPv6 address. "
in that the specification now goes beyond just a literal IPv6 address so that last conditional clause is, while not wrong, perhaps too restrictive, as will be clear to anyone who reads on. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Brian E Carpenter" <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> To: "6man" <ipv6@ietf.org> Cc: "Bob Hinden" <bob.hin...@gmail.com> Sent: Tuesday, May 29, 2012 4:36 PM Subject: [Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt] > This version favours the option that seemed to get the > most positive reaction on the list. There's been quite some > restructuring of the draft since the -00 version, so > please read it through and send comments. > > Brian + Bob > > -------- Original Message -------- > Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt > Date: Tue, 29 May 2012 08:28:15 -0700 > From: internet-dra...@ietf.org > Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org > To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org > CC: ipv6@ietf.org > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the IPv6 > Maintenance Working Group of the IETF. > > Title : Representing IPv6 Zone Identifiers in Uniform Resource Identifiers > Author(s) : Brian Carpenter > Robert M. Hinden > Filename : draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt > Pages : 9 > Date : 2012-05-29 > > This document describes how the Zone Identifier of an IPv6 scoped > address can be represented in a Uniform Resource Identifier that > includes a literal IPv6 address. It updates RFC 3986 and RFC 4007. > > > A URL for this Internet-Draft is: > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > This Internet-Draft can be retrieved at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt > > The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid/ > > _______________________________________________ > I-D-Announce mailing list > i-d-annou...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html > or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt > > > > -------------------------------------------------------------------- > IETF IPv6 working group mailing list > ipv6@ietf.org > Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 > -------------------------------------------------------------------- > -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list ipv6@ietf.org Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------
