On 2012-05-31 09:36, t.petch wrote:
> Looks good.
> 
> I wonder about the first sentence,
> "This document describes how the Zone Identifier of an IPv6 scoped
>    address can be represented in a Uniform Resource Identifier that
>    includes a literal IPv6 address. "
> 
> in that the specification now goes beyond just a literal IPv6 address so

Where? The only proposal concerns the literal address format (at
least that is the intention).

  Brian

> that
> last conditional clause is, while not wrong, perhaps too restrictive, as
> will be clear to anyone who reads on.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Brian E Carpenter" <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com>
> To: "6man" <ipv6@ietf.org>
> Cc: "Bob Hinden" <bob.hin...@gmail.com>
> Sent: Tuesday, May 29, 2012 4:36 PM
> Subject: [Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt]
> 
> 
>> This version favours the option that seemed to get the
>> most positive reaction on the list. There's been quite some
>> restructuring of the draft since the -00 version, so
>> please read it through and send comments.
>>
>>    Brian + Bob
>>
>> -------- Original Message --------
>> Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt
>> Date: Tue, 29 May 2012 08:28:15 -0700
>> From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
>> Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
>> To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
>> CC: ipv6@ietf.org
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This draft is a work item of the IPv6
>> Maintenance Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>> Title           : Representing IPv6 Zone Identifiers in Uniform
> Resource Identifiers
>> Author(s)       : Brian Carpenter
>>                           Robert M. Hinden
>> Filename        : draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt
>> Pages           : 9
>> Date            : 2012-05-29
>>
>>    This document describes how the Zone Identifier of an IPv6 scoped
>>    address can be represented in a Uniform Resource Identifier that
>>    includes a literal IPv6 address.  It updates RFC 3986 and RFC 4007.
>>
>>
>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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>>
>> This Internet-Draft can be retrieved at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid-01.txt
>>
>> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-uri-zoneid/
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