elharo commented on code in PR #583:
URL: https://github.com/apache/maven-jar-plugin/pull/583#discussion_r3753062499
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src/site/xdoc/download.xml.vm:
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@@ -29,13 +29,14 @@ under the License.
<p><strong>${project.name} ${project.version}</strong> is distributed in
source format.</p>
- <p>Use a source archive if you want to build
<strong>${project.name}</strong> yourself.
- Otherwise, use the ready-made binary artifacts from the central
repository.</p>
+ <p>Use a source archive if you intend to build
<strong>${project.name}</strong> yourself.</p>
+
+ <p>Otherwise, simply use the ready-made binary artifacts from
<strong>central repository</strong>.</p>
Review Comment:
delete "simply". Adverbs like this are needless fluff with no meaning, and
shouldn't be here or in the source text.
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