epugh commented on code in PR #889:
URL: https://github.com/apache/solr/pull/889#discussion_r888162638


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solr/solr-ref-guide/modules/configuration-guide/pages/solr-modules.adoc:
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@@ -17,32 +17,34 @@
 // specific language governing permissions and limitations
 // under the License.
 
-Solr modules are addon Solr plugins that are not part of solr-core, but 
officially maintained
+Solr Modules are addon Solr plugins that are not part of solr-core, but 
officially maintained
 by the Solr project. They provide well-defined features such as the 
"extracting" module which lets
 users index rich text documents with Apache Tika. A single module can contain 
multiple Plugins.
 Modules were earlier known as "contribs".
 
-Each module produces a separate `.jar` file in the build, and additional 
dependencies required by
-each module are also packaged with the module. This helps keep the main core 
of Solr small and lean.
+Each module produces a separate `.jar` file in the build, and any additional 
dependencies required
+are also packaged with the module and therefore included for you. This helps 
keep the main core of Solr
+small and lean.
 
 == Installing a module
 
 The easiest way to enable a module is to list the modules you intend to use 
either in the
 system property `solr.modules` or in the environment variable `SOLR_MODULES` 
(e.g. in `solr.in.sh`
 or `solr.in.cmd`). You can also add a `<str name="modules">` tag to
 xref:configuration-guide:configuring-solr-xml.adoc[solr.xml]. The expected 
value is a comma separated list
-of module names, e.g. `SOLR_MODULES=extracting,ltr`. This way of adding 
modules will add
-them to the shared class loader, making them available for every collection in 
Solr.
+of module names, e.g. `SOLR_MODULES=extracting,ltr`. This will add
+them to the shared class loader, making them available to every collection in 
Solr.
 

Review Comment:
   i like the more user centric phrase.



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