--- In [email protected], "gogo7even" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> 
wrote:
> 
> I'm a beginner Japanese student and I am writing a report on 
> Valentine's Day in Japanese. Here is the oral report that I wrote. 
> Since I had to look up conjugations I haven't learned yet, most of 
> this is very bad. I would really appreciate any help, especially 
> using "to omotte" with past-tense verbs. Under each paragraph is 
what 
> I'm trying to say, in English. kanji o amari yomanai, kana de 
> kotaete. roomaji mo ii. Thank you!
> -----

I don't have time to do it all at a time, so just one paragraph (ore 
less) for today, OK?

> BARENTAINDEE ni tsuite
> 
> BATENTAINDEE no rekishi:
> mainen nigatsu juuyokka ni amerikajin wa okashi ya hana ya 
purezento 
> o koukanshimasu.

Perfect so far.

> This is done in honor of St. Valentine.

"Kore wa sei barentain o kinen-shite okonawareru mono desu."

> kochira fushigi na seija wa dare desu ka?

You should say "kono nazo no seija/seijin wa dare deshou?"
When you pose a question and give its answer yourself, use "deshou" 
not "desuka".
"Kochira" is used when you refer to someone beside you; in this 
case "kono" is better.
"Fushigi na seija" sounds like "weird saint", so if you want to 
say "this mysterious saint" use the word(s) "nazo no" or "nazomeita".

> BARENTAINDEE no rekishi wa totemo 
> fushigi desu yo.

OK.

> MOODAN na BARENTAINDEE wa kirisutokyou to ROOMA no 
> dentou ga arimasu.

You might want to say "Genzai no barentaindee wa kirisutokyou to 
rooma no dentou ni nezashite imasu."

> BARENTAINsan wa junkyousha deshita.

We usually don't use "san" for historical persons, so just 
say "barentain wa" or "sei barentain wa"

> In Ancient 
> Rome, he broke the law to give young couples a Christian marriage. 

"Kodai rooma de kare wa houritsu o yabutte wakai danjo ni 
kirisutokyou no kekkonshiki o agesasemashita."

> aruhitobito wa, ima BARENTAINDEE ga nigatsu no naka kara 
> SEINTOBARENTAIN no kaisi o oboeru to omotte imasu.

"Genzai nigatsu juuyokka ni barentaindee o iwau no wa kare no shi o 
kinen suru tame da to kangaeru hito mo imasu."

> oumukashi no ROOMA 
> no toki, nigatsu wa koushiki no haru no hajimetemashita. 

"kodai rooma no jidai dewa nigatsu wa koushiki ni haru no hajimari 
to sarete imashita."

> RUUPAKERIA 
> ha hanjokuryoku no matsuri deshita.

"Ruperukaria wa houjou no matsuri deshita."
Not pronounced "hanjokuryoku" but "hanshokuryoku".

> FAUNASUsama to sasagemashita, 
> kami de nougyou deshita. 

"Sore wa rooma no nougyou no kami(sama) de aru Faunusu-shin ni 
sasagerareta mono desu." 

Sorry, but that's about it for now.
Maybe some more tomorrow.

Kamui





 
Yahoo! Groups Links

<*> To visit your group on the web, go to:
    http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Japanese_Language/

<*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to:
    [EMAIL PROTECTED]

<*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to:
    http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
 



Reply via email to