--- In [email protected], "gogo7even" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
wrote:
I'm going to pick up where I left off yesterday.
> RUUPAKERIA ni ie o souji shimashita kara,
> zenbu machi no mikon no otome wa, ooki tsubo de otome no namae de
> iremashita.
"Ruperukaria niwa ie o souji shite, machi no otome tachi wa jibun no
namae o ookina tsubo ni iremashita."
"Mikon no otome" is redundunt since "otome" means "young unmarried
girl".
"Ookii tsubo" is OK, but "ookina tsubo" is better in this case.
> sorekara, sorezore no tokushindansei wa, tsubo de otome o
> namae o erabimashita.
"Sorekara/Soshite, dokushin no otoko tachi ga hitori zutsu tsubo no
naka ni aru namae o hiita no desu."
> kekkonshiki ha taitei tsugi no tankai deshita.
"Sono kekka kekkon suru danjo ga ooku arawremashita."
> AD 498 ni GAREESHASUhouou wa, ROOMA no kuji no houhou wa kiyouto
to
> omotteiru kara, kinji shimashita.
"Sereki 498 nen, gerashiusu houou wa kono ai no kujibiki wa
ikyouteki de aru to kangaete kinshi shimashita."
"To prohibit" is "kinshi suru" or "kinjiru".
> demo, BARENTAINDEE no ai no shuukan
> wa tsuzumimashita.
Not "tsuzumimashita" but "tsuzukimashita".
> MIDDLE AGES ni aruhito wa, nigatsu juuyokka ni
> tori no koubiki ni hajimaru to omotte imashita.
"Chuusei niwa nigatsu juuyokka wa tori no koubiki no hajimari da to
omowarete imashita." (There's no Middle Ages in the English text.)
> sorede, ai no hi da to omotte imashita.
"Sonotame, sono hi wa ai no hi da to kangaerareta no desu."
"Sorede" is OK, but "sonotame" is better here.
That's all folks.
Kamui
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