Brian: Thanks for your great suggestion and comments. Attached is updated spec file.
Jim > > Jim: > >> Attached is spec file openproj and a workaround patch for openproj >> doesn't works well in j2se 1.6.x. >> >> Please help me to review it. > > > Summary: A free, open source desktop alternative to > > Microsoft Project. > > I don't think it is a good idea to mention "Microsoft Project" by name. > Can't we just describe the project in general terms, as a "Project > management tool" or something? > > > A desktop replacement for Microsoft Project. It is capable of sharing > > Again, can't we describe the project in general terms without mentioning > "Microsoft Project"? > > > files with Microsoft Project and has very similar functionality > > (Gantt, PERT diagram, histogram, charts, reports, detailed usage), as > > well as tree views which aren't in MS Project. > > I'd say "it is compatible with other popular project tools" rather > than mentioning "Microsoft Project" or "MS Project". > > Also, it seems that the description has the same text copied twice. > I'd fix that. > > > # Requires(post): desktop-file-utils > > # Requires(post): shared-mime-info > > # Requires(postun): desktop-file-utils > > # Requires(postun): shared-mime-info > > I'd remove commented lines. > > Brian -------------- next part -------------- An embedded and charset-unspecified text was scrubbed... Name: SUNWopenproj.spec URL: <http://mail.opensolaris.org/pipermail/jds-review/attachments/20080723/9fa55dac/attachment.ksh>
