Jerry:

> These 2 libs are delivered with SUNWpilot-link, they are missing 
> manpages originally. please note libpisync is a shadow manpage. Please 
> review.

Looks good.  Minor comments:

 >     in  a library, which other applications can link to and gain

Remove the comma.

 > gnome-pilot is one example of an
 >     application that does exactly this.

We don't ship an application called gnome-pilot.  Perhaps you should
refer to the actual application name?

Aren't there other pilot apps which should be referenced in SEE ALSO
such as gpilot-install-file.1, gpilotd.1, libgpilotd.3, libpilotdcm.3,
libgpilotconduit.3.  Also these manpages should probably reference
this manpage in their "SEE ALSO" section.

Brian

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