Attached is the manpage modified based on Brian's valuable inputs. Please review again.
Thanks, Jerry Brian Cameron wrote: > > Jerry: > >> These 2 libs are delivered with SUNWpilot-link, they are missing >> manpages originally. please note libpisync is a shadow manpage. >> Please review. > > Looks good. Minor comments: > > > in a library, which other applications can link to and gain > > Remove the comma. > > > gnome-pilot is one example of an > > application that does exactly this. > > We don't ship an application called gnome-pilot. Perhaps you should > refer to the actual application name? Change gnome-pilot to gpilotd-control-applet. > > Aren't there other pilot apps which should be referenced in SEE ALSO > such as gpilot-install-file.1, gpilotd.1, libgpilotd.3, libpilotdcm.3, > libgpilotconduit.3. Also these manpages should probably reference > this manpage in their "SEE ALSO" section. > > Brian -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <http://mail.opensolaris.org/pipermail/jds-review/attachments/20080801/dce49a1e/attachment.html>
