salam, I don't have inkscape and I'm on 128k today. anyway, here is my comments.
1-) I'm totally against using the following words, , عتاد 2-) the script would sound very weird, maybe we should get closer to our audience by using some attractive and easy on ear kind of text something like سمعت بنظام اللينكس ؟ عمرك جربت تنزله ؟ كان صعب؟ ما لقيت حد يساعدك ؟ طب شو رايك لو نزلنالك ياه ببلاش و و شغلنالك العربي ببلاش , و اكيد الصوتيات و المرئيات ببلاش, و راح نعطيك دي في دي ببلاش!!!! بس بلاش!! مش عم نمزح, مجموعه مستخدمي لينكس في الاردن راح تعمل يوم مجاني لتعريف الناس على نظام التشغيل لينكس, و ستقوم المجموعه بتثبيته على جهازك مع الخطوط العربيه و تجهيزه لدعم الصوتيات و المرئيات كل الي عليك تعمله, تيجي يوم 29 الشهر على مجمع النقابات المهنيه, احنا موجودين بنستناك من الساعه تسعه الصبح , بس دير بالك مروحين على ال 4 جيب جهازك , و اذا تقيل حمله تعال لحالك و خود DVD practically this text can be used in our flyer, radio Ad and email and maybe we could make it in a cartoonest way, ya3ni karikateer :p something like penguin with talking bubble I do understand that Abdullah and Kefah might kill me for this feedback but we need this extreme makeover, we need to get close to 18-21 years old mentality. On 15/12/2007, Kefah Issa <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Thank you Abdullah and Jad for the valuable feedback. > > Alaa, please find attached the updated version... > > Lets create a number of variations around that ... feel free to move > things around. > > bear in mind that we might suffice with regular-computer-printer version. > > Regards, > - Kefah. > > On 12/15/07, Abdallah <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Yes. A good start indeed. > > > > Content still needs some work. > > > > - Full address of event + mini direction > > - Emphasize FREE event > > - Emphasize OPEN event > > - Website under group name > > - Contact info at bottom. > > - Distracting font in the intro paragraph. Stick to tried and true. > > Newspaper fonts. > > - Don't let design elements obscure the message > > > > I believe in such designs the light spot should be on the content > > primarily. What is the goal here? Answer all possible questions that your > > target may have. The figure out a way to how best it would be absorbed by > > your reader. Art for the sake of art has no place here at all. > > > > Also, think of reusable content and reusable design please. We don't need > > to redo the thing in every event. Could your design be updated and modified > > for a future event by Jolug ? Other Arab Lugs? Can we offer it in such > > light for others to use with simple instructions set? > > > > Keep up the good work. > > > > Wassalam to all > > > > Abdallah > > > > > > > > > > On Dec 15, 2007 10:20 AM, <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > > > > > A million thanks to Alaa for the wonderful designs. > > > > > > ... > > > > > > - Kefah. > > > > > > > > > ---------- Forwarded Message ---------- > > > > > > Subject: LUG Posters > > > Date: Saturday 15 December 2007 > > > From: "Alaa Tawalbeh" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > > To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > > > hi kefah , > > > > > > find attached files posters we talked about , im working on another > > > version > > > in English. > > > waiting for your comments !! > > > > > > also this is the email of play FM , they do free announcements ( at least > > > that what i was told !! ) ( [EMAIL PROTECTED] ) > > > im still working on the news paper thing ill update you as soon as i have > > > somethings > > > > > > Rgds. > > > Alaa Tawalbeh > > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------- > > > > > > -- > > > Kefah T. Issa > > > >/. freesoft technologies ltd. > > > "free as in freedom." > > > > > > Mobile: +962 777 809050 > > > Land : +962 6 55 23 967 > > > Fax : +962 6 55 61 967 > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > Kefah T. Issa > >/. freesoft "free as in freedom." > tel. +962 6 55 23 967 > cell. +962 777 80 90 50 > > > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Jolug" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/Jolug?hl=en-GB -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
