Yes. A good start indeed.

Content still needs some work.

- Full address of event + mini direction
- Emphasize FREE event
- Emphasize OPEN event
- Website under group name
- Contact info at bottom.
- Distracting font in the intro paragraph. Stick to tried and true.
Newspaper fonts.
- Don't let design elements obscure the message

I believe in such designs the light spot should be on the content
primarily.  What is the goal here?  Answer all possible questions that your
target may have. The figure out a way to how best it would be absorbed by
your reader.   Art for the sake of art has no place here at all.

Also, think of reusable content and reusable design please.   We don't need
to redo the thing in every event. Could your design be updated and modified
for a future event by Jolug ?  Other Arab Lugs?   Can we offer it in such
light for others to use  with simple instructions set?

Keep up the good work.

Wassalam to all

Abdallah




On Dec 15, 2007 10:20 AM, <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

>
> A million thanks to Alaa for the wonderful designs.
>
> ...
>
> - Kefah.
>
>
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>
> Subject: LUG Posters
> Date: Saturday 15 December 2007
> From: "Alaa Tawalbeh" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>
> hi  kefah ,
>
> find attached files posters we  talked about , im working on another
> version
> in English.
> waiting for your comments !!
>
> also this is the email of  play FM , they do free announcements ( at least
> that what i was told !! )  ( [EMAIL PROTECTED] )
> im still working on the news paper thing ill update you as soon as i have
> somethings
>
> Rgds.
> Alaa Tawalbeh
>
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> >/. freesoft technologies ltd.
> "free as in freedom."
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