On Montag, 15. Februar 2016 19:29:32 CET Ingo Klöcker wrote: Morning Ingo, Lydia and Co
> On Monday 15 February 2016 18:36:18 Lydia Pintscher wrote: > > Hi everyone, > > > > A bit less than two weeks ago we sent the first draft for the > > community vision for KDE. We have gotten a lot of useful feedback and > > have now put this into a second draft. It reads as follows: > > "KDE creates technology for a world in which everyone has freedom, > > privacy and control over their digital life." > > I like it. My only nitpick is with "freedom, privacy and control over > their digital life", because when reading it, I automatically parsed it > as "freedom over their digital life, privacy over their digital life and > control over their digital life" which doesn't make sense. > > What about "[...] everyone has control over their digital life, freedom, > and privacy". Hmm, no. This can be misread as "control over their > digital life, control over their freedom, and control over their > privacy". > > What about "[...] everyone has freedom and privacy and control over > their digital life". It's a bit convoluted, but I think it better avoids > the misreading. +1 to this. Maybe this could still be improved/tuned a bit. But in general I like the community vision and in particular the term "technology" rather than "just" software. > Regards, > Ingo Thanks for this work everybody (all the groups!) Mario _______________________________________________ kde-community mailing list kde-community@kde.org https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-community