> It would be nice if an English-speaking person would review the doc as nor > Mehrdad nor me are English and some sentences are a bit dodgy. > It's in kdereview/doc/choqok file index.docbook
Patch attached - sorry, no svn access from work. Regards, Malcolm -- Technical copy-editor & proofreader KDE Proofreading Team KDE British English Translation Team http://l10n.kde.org/team-infos.php?teamcode=en_GB Neu: GMX FreeDSL Komplettanschluss mit DSL 6.000 Flatrate + Telefonanschluss f?r nur 17,95 Euro/mtl.!* http://dsl.gmx.de/?ac=OM.AD.PD003K11308T4569a -------------- next part -------------- 62,63c62,63 < send brief text updates or micro media such as photos or audio clips and publish < them, either to be viewed by anyone or by a restricted group which can be chosen --- > send brief text updates or micro media, such as photos or audio clips, and > publish > them. These can be viewed either by anyone or by a restricted group, which > can be decided 72c72 < <title>Getting started</title> --- > <title>Getting Started</title> 74,76c74,76 < <para>In &choqok; main window there are some time-lines you can see what < your friends posted, replies to them and direct messages sent and < received from friends. And you can post a new message.</para> --- > <para>In the &choqok; main window there are some timelines allowing you to > see what > your friends have posted, replies to them and direct messages sent and > received from friends. You can also post a new message.</para> 82c82 < <screeninfo>Here's a screenshot of &choqok; main window</screeninfo> --- > <screeninfo>Here is a screenshot of the &choqok; main window</screeninfo> 94c94 < the service search api can offer to a client).</para> --- > the service-search API can offer to a client).</para> 96c96 < <para>This function is available via <menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu> --- > <para>This function is available via the <menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu> 99,100c99,100 < <keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>) < For example you can search for a special word in all users posts:</para> --- > <keycap>F</keycap></keycombo>). > For example, you can search for a special word in all users' posts:</para> 117c117 < <title>Configuring an account</title> --- > <title>Configuring an Account</title> 119c119 < <para>Open &choqok; configuration window via --- > <para>Open the &choqok; configuration window via 123c123 < button, the <guilabel>Add a new account</guilabel> window will appear. --- > button. The <guilabel>Add a new account</guilabel> window will appear. 138,141c138,141 < <para>Simply enter your desired, unique alias, username and password and click < the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button. This will check your credentials and if < everything is right, your account will be ready to use.</para> < <para>You can configure other accounts after it.</para> --- > <para>Simply enter your desired unique alias, username and password and click > the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button. This will check your credentials and, if > everything is okay, your account will be ready to use.</para> > <para>You can configure other accounts subsequently.</para> 145c145 < <title>Special features</title> --- > <title>Special Features</title> 150c150 < your posts and your friends posts). --- > posts by you and your friends). 175c175 < When new posts are received &choqok; marks them as unread and shows the number --- > When new posts are received, &choqok; marks them as unread and shows the > number 293c293 < <guimenuitem>Show Statusbar</guimenuitem> --- > <guimenuitem>Show Status bar</guimenuitem> 295c295 < <listitem><para><action>Toggle</action> the statusbar.</para></listitem> --- > <listitem><para><action>Toggle</action> the status bar.</para></listitem> 361c361 < <title>How to obtain &choqok;</title> --- > <title>How to Obtain &choqok;</title> 368c368 < <title>Compilation and installation</title> --- > <title>Compilation and Installation</title>
