On 03/30/2015 01:23 PM, Bruce Dubbs wrote:
[email protected] wrote:
Should "2.5. Setting The $LFS Variable" be changed to "2.5. Checking
The $LFS
Variable" with "export LFS=/mnt/lfs" deleted. It seems redundant as
"export
LFS=/mnt/lfs" is done in "2.4. Mounting the New Partition." The first
paragraph
could perhaps also be deleted and the "Having this variable set ..."
paragraph
moved beneath the "Make sure the output ..." paragraph.
Another option would be to delete the shaded "export LFS=/mnt/lfs"
command
block. "Choose a directory location and set the variable with the
following
command:" could be changed to "In the previous chapter the LFS
variable was set
with "export LFS=/mnt/lfs."
Just a thought, I realize it's far from a significant issue.
Perhaps we should reverse the order of Section 2.4 and Section 2.5.
If we do that, then we don't need to mention the export command in
"Mounting...".
-- Bruce
I think that would work and perhaps be simpler.
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