On 2012/12/31 14:59:45, david.nalesnik wrote:
Harm--
This looks great! Thank you for the 'full-length option. I can't be
alone in
hating lines ending with incomplete dashes.
Hi David, thanks for reviewing!
All I have is a suggestion or two, and some quibbles.
Besides what I've pointed out inline, I should mention that I got a
number of
whitespace errors when I applied your patch. There are a number of
spots where
you should trim the ends of lines (mostly in the .scm file).
Done. (Hope so) https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm
File scm/define-markup-commands.scm (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode155
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:155: If @code{full-length} is set
@code{#t}
(default) the dashed-line extends to the set to #t
Done https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode156
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:156: whole length given by @var{dest},
without
white space at begin/end. beginning or end.
Done https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode169
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:169: (let* (;; Get the line-thickness. I think your variable name is sufficient--no comment needed.
Ok. Deleted. https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode181
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:181: (begin Branches of if expression should be aligned with test (here and
elsewhere). Done https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode195
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:195: (new-off (/ (- line-length corr (*
(+ 1
guess) on)) guess)) Why not use (1+ guess)
Done https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode231
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:231: #f) Could omit the boolean--value will be unspecified.
Done https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode233
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:233: ;; If `on´ or `off´ is negative,
or both,
`on´ and `off´ equals zero a Possibly "...or the sum of `on' and `off' equals [is] zero..."
Changed https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode244
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:244: #f) Here again, you could omit the alternate.
Done https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode248
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:248: (interval-widen (ordered-cons 0 x) half-thick) You do such a thorough job of commenting everything, but you don't
explain why
you need `half-thick' here.
Comment added. https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/diff/1/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode264
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:264: Manual settings for @code{off} is
possible
to get larger or smaller space "are possible"
Done. https://codereview.appspot.com/7029045/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel