On 2014/06/14 18:48:14, J_lowe wrote: https://codereview.appspot.com/102450043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely
File Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/102450043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely#newcode1002
Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely:1002: color. We need a new (obvious) paragraph for this new text I think, so give a
line
space after the previous one.
The syntax is a bit uncomfortable I think. Are they really just called
'dots'?
Here's my suggestion:
"Fingering indication dots can be colored as well as parenthesized;
the
parenthesis's color can also be altered independently."
The example will show the subtleties of 'inversion' and
'modification'. done I highly appreciate any suggestion to improve my wording, syntax and grammar... Sometimes I feel it's more difficult to write documentation than code. https://codereview.appspot.com/102450043/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
