Reviewers: ,
Message:
I came across this rather mishapen wording in NR 4.6.2 – so I changed
it.
Description:
Improve wording for an NR paragraph
The paragraph from "Avoid (or reduce)" in spacing.itely
used 'for example' twice in a row. The description of the
'volta bracket' issue was unclear in terminology and phrasing.
Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/
Affected files (+4, -5 lines):
M Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
Index: Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
diff --git a/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
b/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
index
d88fa8b27e30c7066f0bf4c11f892c2f960f46e1..a286214f072247feed82b36202ed838a0fab83dc
100644
--- a/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
+++ b/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
@@ -3484,11 +3484,10 @@ assignment will force a layout with 2 pages.
@item
Avoid (or reduce) objects that increase the vertical size of a
-system. For example, volta repeats (or alternate repeats) require
-extra space. If these repeats are spread over two systems, they
-will take up more space than one system with the volta repeats and
-another system without. For example, dynamics that @q{stick out} of
-a system can be moved closer to the staff:
+system. For example, volta brackets for alternative repeat endings
+require extra space. If these endings are spread over two systems, they
+will take up more space than if they are on the same system.
+Or dynamics that @q{stick out} of a system can be moved closer to the
staff:
@lilypond[verbatim,quote]
\relative e' {
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