LGTM, Marc
Am 02.09.2015 um 21:26 schrieb simon.albre...@mail.de:
Reviewers: , Message: I came across this rather mishapen wording in NR 4.6.2 – so I changed it. Description: Improve wording for an NR paragraph The paragraph from "Avoid (or reduce)" in spacing.itely used 'for example' twice in a row. The description of the 'volta bracket' issue was unclear in terminology and phrasing. Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/ Affected files (+4, -5 lines): M Documentation/notation/spacing.itely Index: Documentation/notation/spacing.itely diff --git a/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely b/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely index d88fa8b27e30c7066f0bf4c11f892c2f960f46e1..a286214f072247feed82b36202ed838a0fab83dc 100644 --- a/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely +++ b/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely @@ -3484,11 +3484,10 @@ assignment will force a layout with 2 pages. @item Avoid (or reduce) objects that increase the vertical size of a -system. For example, volta repeats (or alternate repeats) require -extra space. If these repeats are spread over two systems, they -will take up more space than one system with the volta repeats and -another system without. For example, dynamics that @q{stick out} of -a system can be moved closer to the staff: +system. For example, volta brackets for alternative repeat endings +require extra space. If these endings are spread over two systems, they +will take up more space than if they are on the same system. +Or dynamics that @q{stick out} of a system can be moved closer to the staff: @lilypond[verbatim,quote] \relative e' { _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
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