Some more nits. Thanks for working on this!
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi File Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode28 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:28: and the website (also see @ref{Website work}). It is also prepared In documentation, please use two spaces after a full stop that indicates a sentence ending. https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode42 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:42: @code{LilyDev-VERSION-debian-vm.zip}. GNU/Linux users are recommended s/@code/@file/ https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode46 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:46: create it from the sources located in the /mkosi subdirectory ... in the @code{/mkosi} sub directory... https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode98 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:98: extracted the files: (this may take some time) I suggest to put the colon after the parenthesized text. https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode104 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:104: For Windows, look for the tools @strong{FCIV} or @strong{certutil} s/@strong/@command/ https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode110 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:110: that @q{VBoxManage} is in your PATH or call it from your @code{PATH} https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode114 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:114: VBoxManage convertfromraw LilyDev-VERSION-debian-vm.img LilyDev-VERSION-debian-vm.vdi This is too long to be printed in the PDF output without an overfull line. I thus suggest @example VBoxManage convertfromraw LilyDev-VERSION-debian-vm.img \ LilyDev-VERSION-debian-vm.vdi @end example https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode135 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:135: least 1 GB of RAM; the more RAM you can spare from your host the 1@dmn{GB} https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode142 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:142: @code{~/VirtualBox VMs/NAME}). Click on @q{Use an existing virtual s/@code/@file/ https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode189 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:189: @q{passwd} as @q{dev} user, without invoking @q{su}. s/@q{passwd}/@command{passwd}/ s/@q{su}/@command{su}/ https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode200 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:200: system configuration. The @q{sudo} tool allows to gain superuser @command{sudo} https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode208 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:208: your AltGr key. Normally you will use the default layout settings, @key{AltGr} https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode209 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:209: so take number 1. The same holds for the question whether you want s/number 1/number@tie{}1/ https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode212 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:212: Ctrl+Alt+Backspace as a shortcut to terminate the X server. @key{Ctrl+Alt+Backspace} https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode229 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:229: already, simply type @code{./setup.sh} to run the interactive script s/@code/@command/ https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/
