Qu Wenruo posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2015 09:21:15 +0800 as excerpted: > +WARNING: If one hopes to rollback to ext2/3/4, he or she should not execute > +*btrfs balance* command on converted btrfs. > +Since it will change the extent layout and make *btrfs-convert* unable to > +rollback.
Because "since" is subordinating and the sentence doesn't contain what it is subordinated to as that's explained in the previous sentence, "Since it will..." introduces a sentence fragment. Possible correction 1, combine the sentences: Either simply eliminate the period following the previous sentence, or convert it to a comma, either way combining the sentences into one. Possible correction 2, eliminate the subordinator: Eliminate "Since" and begin the second sentence with "A balance..." (replacing "it"). Possible correction 3, reorder and edit, something like this: +WARNING: Do not execute a *btrfs balance" on a converted btrfs until you +are sure you will not rollback, as a balance changes the extent layout +and prevents btrfs-convert from successfully rolling back to ext2/3/4. -- Duncan - List replies preferred. No HTML msgs. "Every nonfree program has a lord, a master -- and if you use the program, he is your master." Richard Stallman -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-btrfs" in the body of a message to majord...@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
