On Thu, Feb 10, 2011 at 9:14 AM, Ulrich Windl
<ulrich.wi...@rz.uni-regensburg.de> wrote:
> Hi!
>
> I'm getting into Linux-HA, and it seems the "documentation" was made with a 
> very "hot needle". For example, ocf:pacemaker:ping has the following 
> documentation ("crm(live)ra# info ocf:ping" in SLES11 SP3+Updates):
>> crm(live)ra# info ocf:ping
>>     PID file
>>
>> dampen (integer, [5s]): Dampening interval
>>     The time to wait (dampening) further changes occur
>
> The sentence above is grammatically wrong.

At least its spelt correctly, which is more than people usually get from me.

>
>>
>> name (string, [pingd]): Attribute name
>>     The name of the attributes to set.  This is the name to be used in the 
>> constraints.
>>
>> multiplier (integer): Value multiplier
>>     The number by which to multiply the number of connected ping nodes by
>
> Please explain the reason (semantics) for the multiplication!

Please read "Pacemaker Explained"

>
>>
>> host_list* (string): Host list
>>     The list of ping nodes to count.
>
> "to count", or "to ping", or both?

My, we are pedantic today.

"To ping and count towards the number of active hosts"

>> attempts (integer, [2]): no. of ping attempts
>>     Number of ping attempts, per host, before declaring it dead
>>
>> timeout (integer, [2]): ping timeout in seconds
>>     How long, in seconds, to wait before declaring a ping lost
>
> "a ping lost" == "a host dead"?

Yes

> Or is it the "the monitor reports a failure"?

No

>> options (string): Extra Options
>>     A catch all for any other options that need to be passed to ping.
>
> What about "Additional options to be passed to ping"?

This text is too short, this text is too long... are you ever happy?

>
>>
>> debug (string, [false]): Verbose logging
>>     Enables to use default attrd_updater verbose logging on every call.
>
> What about "`true' enables verbose logging"?
>
>>
>> Operations' defaults (advisory minimum):
>>
>>     start         timeout=60
>>     stop          timeout=20
>>     reload        timeout=100
>>     monitor_0     interval=10 timeout=60
>
> Is it really "monitor_0"? What is that "_0"?

I'm guessing a typo

>
> Regards,
> Ulrich
>
>
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