On 31-Dec-06, at 12:13 PM, krishnakant Mane wrote:

I have finally gone through the entire document and would like to
suggest some changes.
I wanted feedback so that I don't edit it before.

i would suggest that you put these in the long form of the brochure under appropriate headings. The short form is already becoming too long


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Kenneth Gonsalves
Associate, NRC-FOSS
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http://nrcfosshelpline.in/web/




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