On Thu, May 17, 2018 at 09:36:00AM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> > +    If the speculative page fault fails because of a concurrency is
> 
>                                            because a concurrency is

While one can use concurrency as a noun, it sounds archaic to me.  I'd
rather:

        If the speculative page fault fails because a concurrent modification
        is detected or because underlying PMD or PTE tables are not yet

> > +    detected or because underlying PMD or PTE tables are not yet
> > +    allocating, it is failing its processing and a classic page fault
> 
>        allocated, the speculative page fault fails and a classic page fault
> 
> > +    is then tried.

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