Hi, Well structured and written document, with the right balance between brevity and detail.
A few small nits, which can be fixed in a later update: - The last paragraph of the introduction refers to the “LISP specifications” in plural and lists a single reference. I think it should read “LISP specification”. - First paragraph of Section 3 s/inetrworking/interworking/ Same in Section 3.5 - I think someone already mentioned this in a previous review, I would replace dashes with parentheses when used like this: "typically -but not limited to- an IPv4 or IPv6 address” - Right before Section 3.4.3.1 s/LISP-ALT and LISP+DDT/LISP+ALT and LISP-DDT/ -Lori On Oct 25, 2014, at 3:03 PM, Luigi Iannone <[email protected]> wrote: > All, > > A lot of work has been done lately on draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-07 and the > authors requested a work group last call. > > This email starts a WG last call, to end November 14th, 2014. > > You will find the document here: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-07 > > Please review this WG document. Let the working group know if you agree that > it is ready for handing to the AD, or if you see issues with it. > If you see issues, please be as specific as possible about the problems, and > if possible suggest text to resolve them. > > Joel & Luigi > _______________________________________________ > lisp mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
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