Hi Dino, 

Please see inine. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Dino Farinacci [mailto:farina...@gmail.com]
> Envoyé : jeudi 4 mai 2017 19:58
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN
> Cc : Joel M. Halpern; lisp@ietf.org list
> Objet : Re: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-03.txt
> 
> > Hi Dino,
> >
> > I still have comments to this text:
> >
> > “Values in the "For Future Assignment" range can be assigned according
> >                     to procedures in [RFC5226]. »
> 
> Yes it does and it was text added to get RFC6830 published.
> 
> > - replace RFC5226 with RFC8113. Pointing to RFC5226 does not make sense
> here.
> 
> Pointing to 5226 indicates to look in the IANA considerations section. And
> in that section we make refernece to 8113.

[Med] I see. Citing RFC5226 is odd then. Either you point to your IANA section 
in the document or to RFC8113.

> 
> > - Your table that summarizes the assigned value includes a “not
> assigned” entry. I guess “"For Future Assignment" range” in the text above
> is referring to that entry. If you insist to maintain “not assigned” value
> in your table, then please use consistent wording in both the table and
> the text quoted above.
> 
> I’ll fix.
[Med] Thanks.

> 
> >  And also to this one in Section 7.1.
> >
> >    “It is being requested that the IANA be authoritative for LISP
> Message
> >                     Type definitions and that it refers to this document
> as well as
> >                     [RFC8113] as references.”
> >
> > - What is the purpose of this text? What actions are you requiring from
> IANA?
> 
> To reflect Joel’s comment.

[Med] I'm afraid I don't get this. Unless there is an action that is required 
from IANA, please remove that text. 

> 
> > A minor comment about “This document requests IANA to add it to the LISP
> Message Type Registry.”
> > - The name of the registry is “LISP Packet Types” not “LISP Message
> Type”
> 
> Will fix. Thanks.
> 

[Med] Thanks.

> I will post new documents now with these changes.
> 
> Dino

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