sent from Android ---------- Messaggio inoltrato ---------- Da: "Margherita Di Leo" <[email protected]> Data: 21/giu/2013 22:25 Oggetto: Re: [Live-demo] OSGeo-Live poster A: "Activity Workshop" <[email protected]> Cc:
Hey Thanks for the suggestions. I'll take care of that as soon as i have access to a computer (i m currently traveling ). cheers sent from Android Il giorno 21/giu/2013 21:54, "Activity Workshop" <[email protected]> ha scritto: > The poster looks great, that's a really useful contribution. > > If I may be picky, I'd like to suggest a few minor improvements, maybe > somebody with LibreOffice can think about these when they're updating the > details for 6.5. > > - The icon for GpsPrune shows the "R" logo, I guess this is an oversight? > It would be good if the correct one could be used. > - The opening sentence "In recent years..." seems out of place and > redundant, I'd prefer to lose it completely. But if you want it to stay, > at least change it to "the accessibility... HAS changed", not have changed. > - The sentence beginning "it is available as ..." in the central bubble is > too long, shortening it or splitting it would make things clearer imho. > > After editing the odp, it would be a good idea to re-generate the pdf file > and upload that too, and also put a little thumbnail graphic of it on the > "Live GIS Poster" wiki page. That way people can get an idea of what it is > before they download the 8MB pdf. > > Again, good work from those involved! > activityworkshop > > ______________________________**_________________ > Live-demo mailing list > [email protected] > http://lists.osgeo.org/**mailman/listinfo/live-demo<http://lists.osgeo.org/mailman/listinfo/live-demo> > http://live.osgeo.org > http://wiki.osgeo.org/wiki/**Live_GIS_Disc<http://wiki.osgeo.org/wiki/Live_GIS_Disc> >
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