Authors,

Thanks for the bis version of RFC 8919 and the clarifying text on errata.
The issues raised with respect to the errata have been addressed well in the 
bis version.
However, I believe that the bis version is also an opportunity for us to
address any other ambiguities and clarifications and not just restrict it to 
the raised errata. RFC 8919 is going to serve as base document for many
future applications /attributes and a clear definition and documentation
is necessary for interoperable implementations as well as for future
evolution of the protocol.

I have below comments on the document

1. The definition of what constitutes an application in the scope of this 
document is not
    clearly defined in the document. Currently RSVP,SR-TE, LFA, Flex-algo have 
been defined
        so it appears that any application that uses TE attributes can be 
defined as a separate application.
        The TE mechanisms like RSVP, SR-TE and flex-algo have been defined as 
separate applications
        and it appears features having significantly different
        forwarding plane is defined as new application. It is not clear if SRv6 
would be 
        qualified as a new application. 
        LFA for different forwarding planes such as IP, MPLS, SRv6 are not 
separate applications
        but LFA is defined as a single application.
        I have also seen many drafts confusing application specific to be user 
application.
        I  suggest to add a section and describe what is an application clearly 
in the draft that should provide
        sufficient input on what can be defined as an application from ASLA 
context in future.
        
        
2. "   When SABM or UDABM Length is non-zero and the L-flag is NOT set, all
   applications specified in the bit mask MUST use the link attribute
   advertisements in the sub-TLV."
   Applications such as RSVP, SR-TE, LFA already use legacy advertisements. 
   This document suggests that if any attribute is advertised with an 
application bit set in ASLA
   ASLA advertisements MUST be used by that application.
   Implementations may support ASLA for only some applications. 
   I suggest to add below text.
   
   Until all nodes upgraded to support ASLA for a particular application, 
different values of link attributes
   MUST NOT be advertised for that application in legacy advertisement and ASLA 
advertisements.


Rgds
Shraddha


Juniper Business Use Only

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Folks -

Please note V01 of the RFC8919bis draft has been posted.

This version incorporates comments received from Bruno.

   Les

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Name:           draft-ginsberg-lsr-rfc8919bis
Revision:       01
Title:          IS-IS Application-Specific Link Attributes
Document date:  2022-06-20
Group:          Individual Submission
Pages:          25
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Abstract:
   Existing traffic-engineering-related link attribute advertisements
   have been defined and are used in RSVP-TE deployments.  Since the
   original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional applications (e.g.,
   Segment Routing Policy and Loop-Free Alternates) that also make use
   of the link attribute advertisements have been defined.  In cases
   where multiple applications wish to make use of these link
   attributes, the current advertisements do not support application-
   specific values for a given attribute, nor do they support indication
   of which applications are using the advertised value for a given
   link.  This document introduces new link attribute advertisements
   that address both of these shortcomings.

   This document obsoletes RFC 8919.




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