Disclaimer: I am not an author of the flex-algo draft.

However, the text regarding "scope" of the FAD sub-TLV is in the context of the 
flooding scope of the containing Router Capability TLV (as defined in RFC 7981).
There we have two scopes defined:

1)Area/level scope (S-bit clear)

Such information MUST NOT be leaked between levels

2)Domain-wide scope (S-bit set)

Such information MUST be flooded across the entire IS-IS flooding domain - 
which means it is leaked between levels (UP and DOWN as appropriate)

Both "area/level" and "domain-wide" are terms used in RFC 7981.

The full paragraph from the flex-algo draft reads:

"The IS-IS FAD Sub-TLV has an area scope. The Router Capability TLV in which 
the FAD Sub-TLV is present MUST have the S-bit clear."

I think this is correct - but if the authors wanted to update this to 
"area/level" I would not object.

   Les

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lsr <lsr-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Acee Lindem
> Sent: Monday, February 13, 2023 12:15 PM
> To: Chris Parker <ch...@networkfuntimes.com>
> Cc: lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Two small potential typing errors in 
> draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo
> 
> Hi Chris,
> 
> > On Feb 13, 2023, at 2:56 PM, Chris Parker <ch...@networkfuntimes.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > First time poster here. Sincere apologies if I make any mistakes in
> etiquette. I work at Juniper, and am mailing on suggestion of Shraddha
> Hegde, after a conversation about draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo.
> >
> > Having read the draft, I think I've found two tiny things to fix.
> >
> > The first is a typo: In the text "The following values area allocated by 
> > IANA
> from this registry for Flex-Algorithms", I think it should say "are", not 
> "area”.
> 
> This is definitely a typo.
> 
> >
> > The second is a point of clarification in the text "The IS-IS FAD Sub-TLV 
> > has
> an area scope". I think perhaps this should be "level scope", not "area
> scope".
> 
> I can’t seem to find similar IS-IS terminology. I’ll defer to the authors.
> However, you’d be correct for OSPF.
> 
> >
> > For example, imagine a level 2 backbone that contains four areas. I would
> imagine the intended behavior is actually to flood this sub-TLV through the
> entire level 2 backbone, rather than just to the other routers in the 
> particular
> area that the originator happens to reside in?
> >
> > Hopefully these are useful changes. Apologies once again if I've made any
> errors in this process.
> 
> Speaking as WG Co-Chair - This is definitely the right process and we look
> forward to your future reviews of LSR documents!!!
> 
> Thanks,
> Acee
> 
> 
> >
> > Best regards
> > Chris Parker
> >
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