Hi Tom, I believe Yingzhen and I have fixed all of these nits in the -14 version.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang/ > On Jun 1, 2023, at 6:16 AM, tom petch <ie...@btconnect.com> wrote: > > Acee > > My comments all relate to the 'latter I-D', that is to the extended LSAs YANG > model, the one you really want to publish and not to the admin tags (which > you will doubtless want to publish in due course). > > Tom Petch. > _____________________________________ > From: Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> > Sent: 31 May 2023 19:44 > Subject: Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-admin-tags-08.txt > > Hi Tom, > > On May 31, 2023, at 06:45, tom petch <ie...@btconnect.com> wrote: > > From: Lsr <lsr-boun...@ietf.org<mailto:lsr-boun...@ietf.org>> on behalf of > Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com<mailto:acee.i...@gmail.com>> > Sent: 28 May 2023 20:35 > > Simply refreshed before expiration and updated a reference. We really need to > publish the extended LSAs YANG model as it is a prerequisite for a lot of > drafts. > > <tp> > Regarding the latter, I noted back in 2020 that it was a tough read and that > has not changed, so I will likely only have the energy to review it once and > so will wait for at least WGLC before undertaking such a review. Meanwhile > I see some editorial glitches but would not appreciate a revised I-D unless > and until that WGLC is imminent. > > s.1.1 text is out of date > > I don’t see a problem in -09. I updated with with the full list of normative words. > > > /opf:ospfv3/ospf:body: > here and elsewhere, what is the final colon doing? > > I don’t see this anywhere in the draft. For better or worse, this is the format that “pyang -f tree” provides. > > > > contact URL is out of date > > I’ll update my Email. This is updated. > > > references to OSPF YANG need updating to the RFC > > This is fixed in -09. Fixed. > > > > 'Figure .. ' now appears in four places, doubtless a 'good idea' from the > tool makers. > > There is only “Figure 1”. I agree this is confusing. I’ve removed all the figure designations. Thanks, Acee > > Thanks, > Acee > > > > Like I say, not justifying a new I-D just yet IMHO. > > Tom Petch > > Thanks, > Acee > > On May 28, 2023, at 3:29 PM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Link State Routing > (LSR) WG of the IETF. > > Title : Extensions to OSPF for Advertising Prefix Administrative > Tags > Authors : Acee Lindem > Peter Psenak > Yingzhen Qu > Filename : draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-admin-tags-08.txt > Pages : 19 > Date : 2023-05-28 > > Abstract: > It is useful for routers in OSPFv2 and OSPFv3 routing domains to be > able to associate tags with prefixes. Previously, OSPFv2 and OSPFv3 > were relegated to a single tag and only for AS External and Not-So- > Stubby-Area (NSSA) prefixes. With the flexible encodings provided by > OSPFv2 Prefix/Link Attribute Advertisement and OSPFv3 Extended LSAs, > multiple administrative tags may be advertised for all types of > prefixes. These administrative tags can be used for many > applications including route redistribution policy, selective prefix > prioritization, selective IP Fast-ReRoute (IPFRR) prefix protection, > and many others. > > The ISIS protocol supports a similar mechanism that is described in > RFC 5130. > > The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-admin-tags/ > > There is also an HTML version available at: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-admin-tags-08.html > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-admin-tags-08 > > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts > > > _______________________________________________ > Lsr mailing list > Lsr@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr > > _______________________________________________ > Lsr mailing list > Lsr@ietf.org<mailto:Lsr@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr > _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
