> ... in Linux operating system 
zamenjaj z "in the GNU/Linux ..."

> and other open source software.
kaj, ko bi raje rekli Free ? Ali pa vsaj Free / OSS.

> Beside
Zdi se mi, da je Besides, a nisem siguren. AFAIK je beside bolj lokacijsko.

> deployment of Linux as server platform 
as a server platform

> in schools etc. Because of the common goal of
> propagating Linux and open source community, its members are participating
Kaj, ko bi spremenil v In the interest of the common goal of spreading
Linux and the Free software movement our members participate have participated
in various events.. ?

...
>  and different groups in Italy. 
IMO bolje many oz. various.

> One of the latest projects
> is taking part in iniciative
an initiative.

Upam, da tole nestrokovno lektoriranje ne prinasa se vecjih napak v
sporocilo. Ce hoces, lahko sam izdelam predelano, popravljeno verzijo,
da ne bos popravljal na roko. Ce je tako, reci samo BU!


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