>> As an editorial suggestion, I'd suggest changing the numbered lists in
>> sections 6-8 back to plain paragraphs since they do not describe
>> sequences of things to do in order.  The numbers have been handy during
>> the revision process to identify what we're arguing about, though.
>
> Seems reasonable; I'll leave them in until IETF LC ends, in case we need
> to use them for the same reason.

If we inten to remove them, I suggest adding a note before each that says
something like this:

[These numbered items are not intended to be in a paricular sequence.  The
numbers are here during document development to make it easier to idenify
the items for discussion, and will be removed before publication.]

Barry
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