On Wednesday, February 15, 2012 01:47:06 PM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > > -----Original Message----- > > From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of > > Scott Kitterman Sent: Wednesday, February 15, 2012 1:13 PM > > To: [email protected] > > Subject: Re: [marf] Reorganizing the AS > > > > From earlier in the thread: > > > If you change "..., though the means for doing so are not specified > > > in > > > this memo." to "as described above." I think that ties it together. > > > The same text is just above in both, so it works either way. > > How about: > > ", such as the mechanisms described in the examples listed above." > > That way it references the mechanisms (which we've already called "examples" > in earlier in that section) while leaving open the idea that others might > come in the future. I think that satisfies both perspectives. > > OK with both of you?
They are already described as examples above, so I don't think it adds anything, but if you prefer it, I'm fine with it. Scott K _______________________________________________ marf mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/marf
