> -----Original Message-----
> From: Pete Resnick [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: Wednesday, April 25, 2012 5:07 PM
> To: Benoit Claise
> Cc: Murray S. Kucherawy; [email protected]; marf-
> [email protected]; The IESG; [email protected]
> Subject: Re: Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-marf-as-14: (with
> DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> 
> After chatting with Benoit offline, I now believe that your addition
> actually increased confusion rather than decreased. What I think you
> want to say is something like, "Further introduction to this topic may
> be found in 6449, which has more information about the general topic of
> abuse reporting. Many of the specific ARF guidelines in this document
> were taken from the principles presented in 6449." The text you've got
> now 'buries the lead'.
> 
> Not required, but I think this might help.

I'm fine with that if you want to do it as an RFC Editor note.  If you need a 
-17, let me know.

-MSK
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