No votes since last Friday. I will wait until the 27th for more votes.
If there are not any more votes, then choice #1 will win with 2 votes.
Brian
On 05/21/10 02:04 PM, Brian Cameron wrote:
Out of the discussion so far I like 3 choices:
#1) The original text
GNOME technologies power SugarLabs and OLPC to help previously
marginalized children throughout the developing world learn,
achieve and begin to transform their communities.
#2) Shorter version
GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
Globally providing children with tools to
learn, achieve, and transform their world.
#3) Really short version
GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
Enabling children to transform their world.
Let's vote. I pick #2. I know Dave & Paul picked #1.
Brian
On 05/19/10 09:27 PM, Paul Cutler wrote:
On Wed, 2010-05-19 at 22:12 +0200, Dave Neary wrote:
Hi,
Bryen M. Yunashko wrote:
I like this revision much better. If we're still looking to shorten
it, how about "Globally providing" instead of "A global effort
providing"?
I really liked the long flowing wordy version - a great message, great
conversation starter, and the text was part of the design. I would love
to wear the t-shirt with the initial design.
Cheers,
Dave.
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After (finally!) catching up on this thread just now (great to see all
the activity on the marketing list!) I agree with Dave.
Reading through some of the text / copy suggestions and putting my
documentation hat, I think to Brian's point of educating what GNOME is
powering / member of an ecosystem I'd leave it as it is in the first
design. I like how it flows as well on the shirt itself.
Paul
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