Sounds good! Paul
On Thu, 2010-05-27 at 21:01 -0500, Brian Cameron wrote: > Okay, no more votes. However, the folks at Sugar Labs made a > small request that the text be changed a bit. > > GNOME, Sugar Labs, and OLPC empower previously marginalized > children throughout the developing world to learn, achieve, and > transform their communities. > > That seems reasonable to me. Does this sound good to people? > > Brian > > > On 05/21/10 02:04 PM, Brian Cameron wrote: > > > > Out of the discussion so far I like 3 choices: > > > > #1) The original text > > > > GNOME technologies power SugarLabs and OLPC to help previously > > marginalized children throughout the developing world learn, > > achieve and begin to transform their communities. > > > > #2) Shorter version > > > > GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC > > Globally providing children with tools to > > learn, achieve, and transform their world. > > > > #3) Really short version > > > > GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC > > Enabling children to transform their world. > > > > Let's vote. I pick #2. I know Dave & Paul picked #1. > > > > Brian > > > > > > On 05/19/10 09:27 PM, Paul Cutler wrote: > >> On Wed, 2010-05-19 at 22:12 +0200, Dave Neary wrote: > >>> Hi, > >>> > >>> Bryen M. Yunashko wrote: > >>>> I like this revision much better. If we're still looking to shorten > >>>> it, how about "Globally providing" instead of "A global effort > >>>> providing"? > >>> > >>> I really liked the long flowing wordy version - a great message, great > >>> conversation starter, and the text was part of the design. I would love > >>> to wear the t-shirt with the initial design. > >>> > >>> Cheers, > >>> Dave. > >>> > >>> -- > >>> Dave Neary > >>> GNOME Foundation member > >>> dne...@gnome.org > >> > >> After (finally!) catching up on this thread just now (great to see all > >> the activity on the marketing list!) I agree with Dave. > >> > >> Reading through some of the text / copy suggestions and putting my > >> documentation hat, I think to Brian's point of educating what GNOME is > >> powering / member of an ecosystem I'd leave it as it is in the first > >> design. I like how it flows as well on the shirt itself. > >> > >> Paul > >> > > > -- marketing-list mailing list marketing-list@gnome.org http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list