Hi Joe, Thanks for checking, also because I’m not a native speaker :)
I used the announcement text from previous CloudMonkey releases: http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/www-announce/201405.mbox/%3ccaee685gjuxe+dna96vs3g6ma-r1eeweisn8bicbmr5mymid...@mail.gmail.com%3E comments in-line; On 26-Aug-2014, at 2:57 pm, Joe Brockmeier <[email protected]> wrote: > On Tue, Aug 26, 2014, at 07:44 AM, Rohit Yadav wrote: >> —— Start — — >> >> Aug <Date of release?>, 2014 - The Apache Software Foundation (ASF), the >> all-volunteer >> developers, stewards, and incubators of more than 170 Open Source >> projects and >> initiatives, today announced Apache CloudStack CloudMonkey 5.2.0, the >> latest >> feature release of the CloudStack CloudMonkey command line interface >> (CLI). > > Not sure there'd be a full ASF release here. It'd probably "Apache > CloudStack" rather than ASF unless we actually send out on the wire. > > I'd drop "CloudStack" from the second reference (after "feature release > of") as it starts getting repetitious. Will fix it. >> Apache CloudStack CloudMonkey is a command line interface (CLI) tool for >> CloudStack written in Python. CloudMonkey can be use both as an interactive > > Should be "used" above. (Rather than "use”) Fixed. >> - Multiple server profiles where users can use cloudmonkey against >> different CloudStack management servers and switch between them using a >> profile option > > CloudMonkey or cloudmonkey? Shouldn't it be proper noun above? This has been historically confusing, I always called it “cloudmonkey” but then few people called it “CloudMonkey” as well. So, we had this understanding that the following be used: “cloudmonkey” - When we talk about the (installed) command line tool or the python module/implementation “CloudMonkey” - When we talk about the CloudStack CloudMonkey project >> - A default profile under the section [local] is added with default >> values >> - Some bugfixes related to network requests, error handling, json >> decoding and shell interactivity > > JSON Fixed. > >> - Every time `set` is called, cloudmonkey will write the config and >> reload config file > > Same q about caps. > >> - Config options `protocol`, `host`, `port`, `path` are deprecated now >> but setting them is still allowed which sets a single “url” option, in >> the config file the [server] section is deprecated now and cloudmonkey >> won’t read values from this section anymore but instead read from >> currently selected server profile > > Same q about caps. In this paragraph, I meant to refer the command line tool users can use. Advise if we should just call it “CloudMonkey” from now onwards if this would be less confusing? > >> "Apache", "CloudStack", "Apache CloudStack", and "ApacheCon" are >> trademarks of >> The Apache Software Foundation. All other brands and trademarks are the >> property >> of their respective owners. > > Is "ApacheCon" used in the release? Do we need to have a mention of that > as a trademark? Not sure, advise how to address it since I copied text from the previous announcement: http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/www-announce/201405.mbox/%3ccaee685gjuxe+dna96vs3g6ma-r1eeweisn8bicbmr5mymid...@mail.gmail.com%3E I’ll wait for Sally’s announcement draft/format and have noted the corrections. Regards. > > Thanks for writing this up and doing the work on marketing@! > > Best, > > jzb > -- > Joe Brockmeier > [email protected] > Twitter: @jzb > http://www.dissociatedpress.net/ Regards, Rohit Yadav Software Architect, ShapeBlue M. +41 779015219 | [email protected] Blog: bhaisaab.org | Twitter: @_bhaisaab Find out more about ShapeBlue and our range of CloudStack related services IaaS Cloud Design & Build<http://shapeblue.com/iaas-cloud-design-and-build//> CSForge – rapid IaaS deployment framework<http://shapeblue.com/csforge/> CloudStack Consulting<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-consultancy/> CloudStack Infrastructure Support<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-infrastructure-support/> CloudStack Bootcamp Training Courses<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-training/> This email and any attachments to it may be confidential and are intended solely for the use of the individual to whom it is addressed. Any views or opinions expressed are solely those of the author and do not necessarily represent those of Shape Blue Ltd or related companies. If you are not the intended recipient of this email, you must neither take any action based upon its contents, nor copy or show it to anyone. Please contact the sender if you believe you have received this email in error. Shape Blue Ltd is a company incorporated in England & Wales. ShapeBlue Services India LLP is a company incorporated in India and is operated under license from Shape Blue Ltd. Shape Blue Brasil Consultoria Ltda is a company incorporated in Brasil and is operated under license from Shape Blue Ltd. ShapeBlue SA Pty Ltd is a company registered by The Republic of South Africa and is traded under license from Shape Blue Ltd. ShapeBlue is a registered trademark.
