Hi Sally thanks for returning with the draft quickly. Please find my comments in-line;
On 27-Aug-2014, at 2:24 am, Sally Khudairi <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello everyone --as promised, the draft (thus far) is below. > > Please forward any comments/corrections/additions no later than 5PM ET > tomorrow (Wednesday), so we can announce at 7AM ET on Thursday. > > Many kind thanks, > Sally > > = = = > > Announcing Apache™ CloudMonkey™ v5.2 v5.2.0 or just “5.2.0" > > Command Line Interface Tool Simplifies Apache CloudStack Configuration and > Management > > 28 August 2014 —Apache CloudStack, the mature, turnkey Open Source cloud > computing software platform used for creating private, public, and hybrid > cloud environments, today announced Apache > CloudMonkey v5.1.0, the latest feature release of its command line interface > tool. v5.2.0 > CloudMonkey is written in Python, and can be used both as an interactive > shell and as a command line tool that simplifies CloudStack configuration and > management. > > Apache CloudMonkey v5.2.0 is the latest feature release of the 5.x line that > was first released in September 2013. Some of the new features and changes > include: > > - Multiple server profiles where users can use CloudMonkey against different > CloudStack management servers and switch between them using a profile option; > - A default profile under the section [local] is added with default values; > - Some bugfixes related to network requests, error handling, JSON decoding > and shell interactivity; > - Every time 'set' is called, CloudMonkey will write the config and reload > config file; > - Configuration options 'protocol', 'host', 'port', 'path' are deprecated now > but setting them is still allowed which sets a single "url" option, in the > config file the [server] section is deprecated now and CloudMonkey won’t read > values from this section anymore but instead read from currently selected > server profile; currently selected -> current > - Missing key/values are automatically set with defaults by CloudMonkey; > - During installation and upgrades, it will detect the platform to install > either pyreadline (Windows) or readline (OSX and Linux); Please check and fix any other grammar, spelling issues. > Downloads and Documentation > The official source code for CloudMonkey v5.2.0 can be downloaded from > http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html. A community-maintained > distribution is available at the Python Package Index (PyPi) at > http://pypi.python.org/pypi/CloudMonkey/ > > CloudMonkey's usage is documented at > https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/CloudStack+CloudMonkey+CLI > Package documentation can be found at http://pythonhosted.org/CloudMonkey > > Availability and Oversight > As with all Apache products, CloudMonkey is released under the Apache License > v2.0, and is overseen by a self-selected team of active contributors to the > project. The Apache CloudStack Project Management Committee (PMC) guides the > Project's day-to-day operations, including community development and product > releases. > > About Apache CloudStack > Apache CloudStack is a mature, turnkey integrated Infrastructure-as-a-Service > (IaaS) Open Source software platform that allows users to build feature-rich > public and private cloud environments. Hailed by Gartner Group as "a solid > product", CloudStack includes an intuitive user interface and rich APIs for > managing the compute, networking, software, and storage infrastructure > resources. CloudStack entered the Apache Incubator in April 2012 and became > an Apache Top-level Project in March 2013. For downloads, documentation, and > ways to become involved with Apache CloudStack, visit > http://cloudstack.apache.org/ and https://twitter.com/CloudStack > Rest looks alright. Thanks for the draft. > # # # > > © The Apache Software Foundation. "Apache", "CloudStack", "Apache > CloudStack", "CloudMonkey", "Apache CloudMonkey", the Apache CloudStack logo, > and the Apache CloudStack Cloud Monkey logo are registered trademarks or > trademarks of The Apache Software Foundation. All other brands and trademarks > are the property of their respective owners. > > Contacts > Apache CloudStack > [FULL NAME] > [telephone number with country code] > [email protected] > > The Apache Software Foundation > Sally Khudairi > +1 617 921 8656 > [email protected] > > > > From: Rohit Yadav <[email protected]> > To: "[email protected]" <[email protected]> > Sent: Tuesday, 26 August 2014, 9:36 > Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Announcement draft for CloudMonkey 5.2.0 release > > > On 26-Aug-2014, at 3:30 pm, Joe Brockmeier <[email protected]> wrote: > > > On Tue, Aug 26, 2014, at 08:11 AM, Rohit Yadav wrote: > >> In this paragraph, I meant to refer the command line tool users can use. > >> Advise if we should just call it “CloudMonkey” from now onwards if this > >> would be less confusing? > > > > So - in documentation, I think you'd be right to use "cloudmonkey" but > > I'd also use <code> or whatever to call out "hey, I'm talking about a > > command/utility here." I find it a bit confusing in an announcement. > > > > In other words, I'm going to cowardly refuse to say either way is wrong, > > but my style instincts say "CloudMonkey" throughout. > > > > Thanks again for writing it up - if I get a chance + the thread is still > > open, I'll try to review + vote today. > > Alright, with you on this let’s call it “CloudMonkey” in most places. > > The voting thread closed as the vote passed but thanks for your review. > > Regards, > > Rohit Yadav > > Software Architect, ShapeBlue > M. +41 779015219 | [email protected] > Blog: bhaisaab.org | Twitter: @_bhaisaab > > > > Find out more about ShapeBlue and our range of CloudStack related services > > IaaS Cloud Design & Build<http://shapeblue.com/iaas-cloud-design-and-build//> > CSForge – rapid IaaS deployment framework<http://shapeblue.com/csforge/> > CloudStack Consulting<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-consultancy/> > CloudStack Infrastructure > Support<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-infrastructure-support/> > CloudStack Bootcamp Training > Courses<http://shapeblue.com/cloudstack-training/> > > This email and any attachments to it may be confidential and are intended > solely for the use of the individual to whom it is addressed. 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