Thanks for the great work, Rohit! I have just a suggestion. What about change: "# Downloads
The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our downloads page: http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html ## Downloads The official source code release can be downloaded from: http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html"; for: "# Downloads The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our downloads page: https://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html"; Also, there is one extra blank space before the comma in "The 4.9.3.0 release notes include a full list of issues fixed , as well" Cheers, Gabriel. 2017-09-11 6:50 GMT-03:00 Rohit Yadav <[email protected]>: > Thanks Giles. > > > All, I think we may be good to go with the announcement but it would be > great if we've another LGTM/review -- I'll wait by EOD tomorrow. Thanks. > > > - Rohit > > [email protected] > www.shapeblue.com > @shapeblue > > > > ------------------------------ > *From:* Giles Sirett <[email protected]> > *Sent:* Monday, September 11, 2017 1:19:04 PM > *To:* [email protected] > *Subject:* RE: Request for review: 4.9.3.0 release announcement > > > Hi Rohit – looks great > > Just a couple of hacks on the grammar > > > > ### START REVIEWED COPY > > > > # Apache CloudStack LTS Maintenance Release 4.9.3.0 > > The Apache CloudStack project is pleased to announce the release of > CloudStack 4.9.3.0 as part of its LTS 4.9.x releases. The CloudStack > 4.9.3.0 release contains more than 180 fixes since the CloudStack 4.9.2.0 > > release. Cloudstack LTS branches are supported for 20 months, and > > will receive updates for first 14 months and only security updates in its > last 6 months. The 4.9 LTS branch is supported until 1 June 2018. > > Apache CloudStack is an integrated Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) > software platform that allows users to build feature-rich public and > private cloud environments. CloudStack includes an intuitive user interface > and rich API for managing the compute, networking, software, and storage > resources. The project became an Apache top level project in March, 2013. > > More information about Apache CloudStack can be found at: > http://cloudstack.apache.org/ > > > # Documentation > > What's new in CloudStack 4.9.3.0: > http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack- > release-notes/en/4.9.3.0/about.html > > The 4.9.3.0 release notes include a full list of issues fixed , as well > as upgrade instructions from previous versions of Apache CloudStack, and > can be found at: > http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack- > release-notes/en/4.9.3.0 > > The official installation, administration and API documentation for > each release are available on our Documentation Page: > http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/ > > # Downloads > > The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our > downloads page: > http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html > > ## Downloads > > The official source code release can be downloaded from: > > http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html > > In addition to the official source code release, individual contributors > have also made convenience binaries available on the Apache CloudStack > download page, and can be found at: > > http://www.shapeblue.com/packages/ > http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/ubuntu/dists/ (packages to be published soon) > http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/6/ (packages to be published soon) > http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/7/ (packages to be published soon) > > ### END VIEWED COPY > > > > > > > > > > Kind regards > > Giles > > > > [email protected] > www.shapeblue.com > @shapeblue > > > > > *From:* Rohit Yadav [mailto:[email protected]] > *Sent:* 11 September 2017 06:39 > *To:* [email protected] > *Subject:* Re: Request for review: 4.9.3.0 release announcement > > > > All, > > > > Can anyone review the announcement draft for 4.9.3.0, thanks. > > > > - Rohit > > [email protected] > www.shapeblue.com > @shapeblue > > > > ------------------------------ > > *From:* Rohit Yadav <[email protected]> > *Sent:* Thursday, September 7, 2017 7:57:50 PM > *To:* [email protected] > *Subject:* Request for review: 4.9.3.0 release announcement > > > > All, > > > > Kindly review: (some links will be activated soon, and may not work now) > > > > ### START > > > > # Apache CloudStack LTS Maintenance Release 4.9.3.0 > > The Apache CloudStack project is pleased to announce the release of the > CloudStack 4.9.3.0 as part of its LTS 4.9.x releases. The CloudStack > 4.9.3.0 release contains more than 180 fixes since the CloudStack 4.9.2.0 > > release. The LTS branches are supported for 20 months, and > > will receive updates for first 14 months and only security updates in its > last 6 months. The 4.9 LTS branch is supported till 1 June 2018. > > Apache CloudStack is an integrated Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) > software platform that allows users to build feature-rich public and > private cloud environments. CloudStack includes an intuitive user interface > and rich API for managing the compute, networking, software, and storage > resources. The project became an Apache top level project in March, 2013. > > More information about Apache CloudStack can be found at: > http://cloudstack.apache.org/ > > > # Documentation > > What's new in CloudStack 4.9.3.0: > http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack- > release-notes/en/4.9.3.0/about.html > > The 4.9.3.0 release notes include a full list of corrected issues, as well > as upgrade instructions from previous versions of Apache CloudStack, and > can be found at: > http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack- > release-notes/en/4.9.3.0 > > The official installation, administration and API documentation for > each release are available on our Documentation Page: > http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/ > > # Downloads > > The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our > downloads page: > http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html > > ## Downloads > > The official source code release can be downloaded from: > > http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html > > In addition to the official source code release, individual contributors > have also made convenience binaries available on the Apache CloudStack > download page, and can be found at: > > http://www.shapeblue.com/packages/ > http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/ubuntu/dists/ (packages to be published soon) > http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/6/ (packages to be published soon) > http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/7/ (packages to be published soon) > > ### END > > > -- > Regards. > > [email protected] > www.shapeblue.com > @shapeblue > > > >
