Thanks Gabriel, I'll incorporate the changes suitably.

- Rohit

________________________________
From: Gabriel Beims Bräscher <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, September 12, 2017 7:59:00 AM
To: [email protected]
Subject: Re: Request for review: 4.9.3.0 release announcement

Thanks for the great work, Rohit!

I have just a suggestion. What about change:
"# Downloads

The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our
downloads page:
http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html

## Downloads

The official source code release can be downloaded from:

http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html";

for:
"# Downloads

The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our
downloads page:
https://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html";

Also, there is one extra blank space before the comma in "The 4.9.3.0 release 
notes include a full list of issues fixed , as well"

Cheers,
Gabriel.

2017-09-11 6:50 GMT-03:00 Rohit Yadav 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>:

Thanks Giles.


All, I think we may be good to go with the announcement but it would be great 
if we've another LGTM/review -- I'll wait by EOD tomorrow. Thanks.


- Rohit

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________________________________
From: Giles Sirett 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
Sent: Monday, September 11, 2017 1:19:04 PM
To: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>
Subject: RE: Request for review: 4.9.3.0 release announcement

Hi Rohit – looks great
Just a couple of hacks on the grammar


### START REVIEWED COPY



# Apache CloudStack LTS Maintenance Release 4.9.3.0

The Apache CloudStack project is pleased to announce the release of
CloudStack 4.9.3.0 as part of its LTS 4.9.x releases. The CloudStack
4.9.3.0 release contains more than 180 fixes since the CloudStack 4.9.2.0

release. Cloudstack LTS branches are supported for 20 months, and

will receive updates for first 14 months and only security updates in its
last 6 months. The 4.9 LTS branch is supported until  1 June 2018.

Apache CloudStack is an integrated Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS)
software platform that allows users to build feature-rich public and
private cloud environments. CloudStack includes an intuitive user interface
and rich API for managing the compute, networking, software, and storage
resources. The project became an Apache top level project in March, 2013.

More information about Apache CloudStack can be found at:
http://cloudstack.apache.org/

# Documentation

What's new in CloudStack 4.9.3.0<http://4.9.3.0>:
http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack-release-notes/en/4.9.3.0/about.html

The 4.9.3.0 release notes include a full list of issues fixed , as well
as upgrade instructions from previous versions of Apache CloudStack, and
can be found at:
http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack-release-notes/en/4.9.3.0

The official installation, administration and API documentation for
each release are available on our Documentation Page:
http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/

# Downloads

The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our
downloads page:
http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html

## Downloads

The official source code release can be downloaded from:

http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html

In addition to the official source code release, individual contributors
have also made convenience binaries available on the Apache CloudStack
download page, and can be found at:

http://www.shapeblue.com/packages/
http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/ubuntu/dists/ (packages to be published soon)
http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/6/ (packages to be published soon)
http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/7/ (packages to be published soon)

### END VIEWED COPY





Kind regards
Giles


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From: Rohit Yadav 
[mailto:[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>]
Sent: 11 September 2017 06:39
To: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Request for review: 4.9.3.0 release announcement


All,



Can anyone review the announcement draft for 4.9.3.0, thanks.



- Rohit

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________________________________
From: Rohit Yadav <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
Sent: Thursday, September 7, 2017 7:57:50 PM
To: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>
Subject: Request for review: 4.9.3.0 release announcement


All,



Kindly review: (some links will be activated soon, and may not work now)



### START



# Apache CloudStack LTS Maintenance Release 4.9.3.0

The Apache CloudStack project is pleased to announce the release of the
CloudStack 4.9.3.0 as part of its LTS 4.9.x releases. The CloudStack
4.9.3.0 release contains more than 180 fixes since the CloudStack 4.9.2.0

release. The LTS branches are supported for 20 months, and

will receive updates for first 14 months and only security updates in its
last 6 months. The 4.9 LTS branch is supported till 1 June 2018.

Apache CloudStack is an integrated Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS)
software platform that allows users to build feature-rich public and
private cloud environments. CloudStack includes an intuitive user interface
and rich API for managing the compute, networking, software, and storage
resources. The project became an Apache top level project in March, 2013.

More information about Apache CloudStack can be found at:
http://cloudstack.apache.org/

# Documentation

What's new in CloudStack 4.9.3.0<http://4.9.3.0>:
http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack-release-notes/en/4.9.3.0/about.html

The 4.9.3.0 release notes include a full list of corrected issues, as well
as upgrade instructions from previous versions of Apache CloudStack, and
can be found at:
http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/projects/cloudstack-release-notes/en/4.9.3.0

The official installation, administration and API documentation for
each release are available on our Documentation Page:
http://docs.cloudstack.apache.org/

# Downloads

The official source code for the 4.9.3.0 release can be downloaded from our
downloads page:
http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html

## Downloads

The official source code release can be downloaded from:

http://cloudstack.apache.org/downloads.html

In addition to the official source code release, individual contributors
have also made convenience binaries available on the Apache CloudStack
download page, and can be found at:

http://www.shapeblue.com/packages/
http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/ubuntu/dists/ (packages to be published soon)
http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/6/ (packages to be published soon)
http://cloudstack.apt-get.eu/centos/7/ (packages to be published soon)

### END

--
Regards.

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www.shapeblue.com<http://www.shapeblue.com>
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