Hey Bryan,

Thanks, I think you're hitting all the big areas that need highlighting here. I like the lead-in text. I think it works as is, I have some fine tuning suggestions if you have a chance. Looking great overall.

Reading the Filters box could be less specific about the list of filters... I think we want to list what you have there but I think the flavor should be more "things such as" (source, author tags...) rather than that explicit list? There is also the star filter and possibly the digg filter rolling with this, but in the larger scope of things, I'd like to give the impression that there's more to come.

In the Tuning box, I feel like the idea that a "topic" is represented by a slider is slightly misleading... but I don't actually have a constructive suggestion on what belongs there or an alternate wording :) For example a slider for an author filter for Ian Bicking doesn't pick out articles about Ian, it picks out articles he wrote. Maybe that's Okay to start with conceptually and people can figure out the difference pretty easily anyway.

The X box could probably mention that you won't see those articles again when browsing other peoples pages since that seems to be an often overlooked concept? Looks okay as is though.

Thanks again,

- Luke



On Jun 26, 2008, at 4:55 PM, Bryan Lence wrote:

Hey Luke,

Here's the tour text (@ bottom). I'd appreciate any feedback, and especially info on other stuff you'd like me to highlight (if there's anything right now).

http://www.openplans.org/projects/melkjug/instructions-and-tour

Bryan

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