On Mon, 20 Feb 2006 12:47:29 -0500 "Gary Hurst" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> http://www.buymbparts.com/newdesign/index.html What the others have said: - It's really classy - The duplication of links is unnecessary - Some text errors: Rusty and I have owned somewhere between 30 Mercedes between us. Should be: Rusty and I have owned around 30 Mercedes between us. Our mission is to offer the Mercedes Benz lover more parts at better prices ((L) more parts at better prices). What is the text in parentheses for? - Use of third person would be better. Craig
