it's just a draft i like first person
On 2/20/06, Craig McCluskey <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > On Mon, 20 Feb 2006 12:47:29 -0500 "Gary Hurst" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > wrote: > > > http://www.buymbparts.com/newdesign/index.html > > What the others have said: > > - It's really classy > > - The duplication of links is unnecessary > > - Some text errors: > > Rusty and I have owned somewhere between 30 Mercedes between us. > > Should be: > > Rusty and I have owned around 30 Mercedes between us. > > > > Our mission is to offer the Mercedes Benz lover more parts at better > prices ((L) more parts at better prices). > > What is the text in parentheses for? > > > - Use of third person would be better. > > > > Craig > > _______________________________________ > http://www.striplin.net > For new parts see official list sponsor: http://www.buymbparts.com/ > For used parts email [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > To Unsubscribe or change delivery options go to: > http://striplin.net/mailman/listinfo/mercedes_striplin.net >
