Hi Paula,
I watched this and noticed it looped around; I saw that also in the page
source. I really like the topic and your handling of it, but the space is
slow; you're talking about noise/buzzing, a kind of hysteria buiding up,
but the reading pace doesn't follow suit, ad the reaader waits for the
next phrase to appear. I do like the open-ended aspect of the piece, which
could apply either to physical or psychological or imaginary issues. The
turning 'shut up' bars also worked well - also as a kind of interference -
they protrudced constantly into the space. I'd like to see where you go
from here -
- Alan
On Mon, 30 Mar 2015, Paula Musgrove wrote:
Hi
Thought I might share my first piece of net art. I leave it open to
interpretation and welcome any responses.
http://www.writtleart.org/PaulaM/shutupanim.html
(Does not work well with Safari on iOS)
Thanks
Paula
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