Hi all, FWIW, the proposed changes to address the point mentioned by Mahesh [1] can be seen at: description text by boucadair · Pull Request #51 · boucadair/rfc8407bis (github.com)<https://github.com/boucadair/rfc8407bis/pull/51/files>
For convenience, the changes can be tracked here: Diff: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt - draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt<https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?url_1=https://boucadair.github.io/rfc8407bis/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt&url_2=https://boucadair.github.io/rfc8407bis/boucadair-patch-2/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt> Only the template is updated because we do already have the following: == Concretely, the IANA Considerations Section SHALL at least provide the following information: * ... * An instruction about how to generate the "revision" statement. == Cheers, Med [1] refer to [yang-doctors] [IANA #1289473] Revision statements in IANA-maintained YANG modules (ietf.org)<https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/yang-doctors/pUCHXggKF2dIeJer8sY-QCz4WTw/> for more context. De : Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com> Envoyé : mercredi 13 mars 2024 03:51 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Cc : netmod@ietf.org Objet : Re: [netmod] IETF#119 I-D Status: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis Hi Med, Thanks for driving this effort on updating RFC 8407. One additional change coming your way, is to address the question of how IANA is supposed to handle updates to IANA YANG modules. The YANG doctors are currently debating those changes. Once agreed, we will bring that discussion here, and will need to update rfc8407bis to provide guidance to authors who update an IANA module. Stay tuned. Cheers. On Mar 12, 2024, at 5:00 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> wrote: Hi all, * A candidate -10 is ready to address 3 comments from Jan: * Long trees * Updated security template * Minor tweaks to Section 3.8 * The changes circulated on the list can be seen here: Compare Editor's Copy to Datatracker<https://boucadair.github.io/rfc8407bis/#go.draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.diff> * Jan raised two other comments (short/uniqueness of prefixes + how to handle "not set") but no changes were made per the feedback received on the list. * Next steps: * Submit -10 right after IETF#119 * WGLC Cheers, Med ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org<mailto:netmod@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod Mahesh Jethanandani mjethanand...@gmail.com<mailto:mjethanand...@gmail.com> ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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