I am ok with Mahesh’s modification of my response related to the first sentence in the Security Considerations Section.
I would suggest that I leave the sentence and put in a not to the RFC editor to either add a pointer to the draft, or the RFC depending on whether or not RFC8407bis is finished or not. I am hoping that to avoid the intf-ext-yang module to be blocked by the publication of RFC8407bis. Regards, -scott. From: Mahesh Jethanandani <[email protected]> Sent: Sunday, October 12, 2025 1:29 PM To: Scott Mansfield <[email protected]> Cc: Reese Enghardt <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang-17 ietf last call Genart review Hi Scott, Just one suggestion to address Reese’s comments. See inline with [mj] On Oct 12, 2025, at 5:46 AM, Scott Mansfield <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: Hello, and thank you for the review! Please see my responses and suggested actions marked by <scott></scott> in-line below. Let me know if the resolutions are acceptable, and I will re-spin the draft. Regards and Thanks, -scott. Snip... Minor issues: Section 9 (Security Considerations) has RFC AAAA, but I don't see where that reference is defined. Please double-check that this reference is clear. <scott> This is from the Security Considerations template found in draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis. I suggest that I simply take out the first sentence of that section since draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis isn't an RFC yet. Leave the rest of the section because the new template is easy to read and use. </scott> [mj] I would just refer to the I-D itself or add a “Note to the RFC Editor”. You can say - “This section is modeled after the template described in Section 3.7 of [I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis]” and let the editor insert the right RFC number when it is assigned (possibly before this document gets to publication state). Alternatively, you can add a “Note to the RFC Editor” and mention that AAAA should be the number that will be assigned to I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis. Thanks Mahesh Jethanandani [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>
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