Authors, As is customary, here is my review of this draft. The draft is clear and to the point – thanks. However, I have a few minor editorial comments that I would appreciate if you could address before we progress the draft to the next stage.
1. The text is missing the definitive article (a/the, etc) or plurals (s) in many cases. This makes it difficult to read. The introduction is particularly at fault, but there are other areas too. Please go through the draft and add these. 2. There are some cases where you have broken up extremely long sentences with many commas, when use of a full stop / period would be more appropriate. This also makes the text difficult to parse. Please go through the draft and update the text as necessary. Thanks, Matthew
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