Hi Dick,

I'm not a native English speaker, but I think I have some corrections.

Confusing enough your diff used '-' for your version and '+' for the
original version, please try to produce diffs specifying files in the
correct order.

On Saturday, 2011-06-25 19:25:06 +0200, Dick Groskamp wrote:

> +  1. You have send in patches that were well-respected to improve the 
> software.

That should be "You have sent" instead.

> +  2. You have added documentation to the Wiki or website that were 
> well-respected to
> +-    improve the non-code part of the project.
> +- 3. You have shown that you can discuss in the mailinglists and that this 
> has
> ++    improvent the non-code part of the project.
> ++ 3. You have shown that you can discuss in the mailing lists and that this 
> has

"mailing lists" IMHO was correct, the nouns aren't concatenated in
English.

> +- 5. The ID will also be your Apache e-mailaddress. Note that the account 
> will be
> +-    set up to forward all received mails to the e-mailaddress you supplied 
> on your
> +-    iCLA. It is not a normal mailaccount but just for forwarding. After you 
> have
> +-    the account there is also a way to associate your Apache e-mailaddress 
> with
> +-    additional e-mailaddresses that you have. (ToDo: Add a link to a how-to)
> ++ 5. The ID will also be your Apache e-mail address. Note that the account 
> will be
> ++    set up to forward all received mails to the e-mail address you supplied 
> on your
> ++    ICLA. It is not a normal mail account but just for forwarding. After 
> you have
> ++    the account there is also a way to associate your Apache e-mail address 
> with
> ++    additional e-mail addresses that you have. (ToDo: Add a link to a 
> how-to)

I think "e-mail address" was correct.

  Eike

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