Op 26-6-2011 14:40, TJ Frazier schreef:
Hi, Dick,
On 6/26/2011 08:14, Dick Groskamp wrote:
[snip] Thanks for fixing those compound nouns. I'm not sure that the progression of "user name" to "user-name" to "username" is complete, but—if it's an Apache convention—I can live with it. You might also fix "abbrIviations" and "Corporate Contributor LiSenCe Agreement".

Thanks for that.
Now I've learned to keep my changes a bit longer on file and not to delete them after sending the e-mail :-) (I had changed the Lisence in the first draft to License, but it got lost in the second)

next thing I've learned is to be more careful with compound nouns, we tend to bring them all together, but
I've noticed that might not be the right way to do it.

I've rapplied my changes and made up a new patch.

--
DiGro

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--- D:/Documents en Settings/Dick/Apache 
Openoffice.org/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/ppmc-faqs.mdtext       vr jun 
24 18:56:53 2011
+++ D:/Documents en Settings/Dick/Apache 
Openoffice.org/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/ppmc-faqs.fix  zo jun 26 
15:01:09 2011
@@ -34,17 +34,17 @@
 
 The following are conditions to become a committer:
 
- 1. You have send in patches that were well-respected to improve the software.
+ 1. You have sent in patches that were well-respected to improve the software.
  2. You have added documentation to the Wiki or website that were 
well-respected to
-    improvent the non-code part of the project.
+    improve the non-code part of the project.
  3. You have shown that you can discuss in the mailing lists and that this has
     brought us forward.
  4. You are well known to the established members, who you are and what you 
have
     done in the past. Regarding this project, a former-one or another project.
 
-If 1 of the 4 statements above are true, then you can be voted in as committer.
+If 1 of the 4 statements above is true, then you can be voted in as committer.
 
-When the vote resut is positive, you will be asked for some information to 
setup
+When the vote result is positive, you will be asked for some information to 
set up
 your committer status.
 <br> ([see here for more information][4])
 
@@ -52,21 +52,21 @@
 
 The following is a brief summary of what to expect as committer:
 
- 1. After your (Invividual Contributor Lisence Agreement ([iCLA][5]) has been
+ 1. After your (individual Contributor License Agreement ([iCLA][5]) has been
     received and registered, you will be invited to specify one or more 
preferred
     Apache user names.
 
     **Important**: The e-mail address you provide in your iCLA will be used 
for the
     following communications with you.
 
-    Please note that there is also a [Corporate Contributor Lisence Agreement
+    Please note that there is also a [Corporate Contributor License Agreement
     (CCLA)][6] if you want/have to commit in the name of a company or 
organization.
 
- 2. Choose one or more User Names that would be acceptable to you. These are 
short
-    names or abbriviations that will be used for a Unix account login.
+ 2. Choose one or more User Name(s) that would be acceptable to you. These are 
short
+    names or abbreviations that will be used for a Unix account login.
 
     **Example:** <br>
-    Your name is "John Doe", so an ID cound be "johnd" or "jdoe". [Here you 
can see
+    Your name is "John Doe", so an ID could be "johnd" or "jdoe". [Here you 
can see
     if the ID is still free][7] or already given to another committer.
     
     Supply all other information that is requested. Return the ID requests as
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 
  5. The ID will also be your Apache e-mail address. Note that the account will 
be
     set up to forward all received mails to the e-mail address you supplied on 
your
-    ICLA. It is not a normal mail account but just for forwarding. After you 
have
+    iCLA. It is not a normal mail account but just for forwarding. After you 
have
     the account there is also a way to associate your Apache e-mail address 
with
     additional e-mail addresses that you have. (ToDo: Add a link to a how-to)
 

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