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  Server: cvs.openpkg.org                  Name:   Michael Schloh
  Root:   /e/openpkg/cvs                   Email:  [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  Module: openpkg-web                      Date:   11-Aug-2004 17:37:20
  Branch: HEAD                             Handle: 2004081116372000

  Modified files:
    openpkg-web             advocacy.wml

  Log:
    english spelling

  Summary:
    Revision    Changes     Path
    1.4         +6  -6      openpkg-web/advocacy.wml
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  patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
  Index: openpkg-web/advocacy.wml
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  $ cvs diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4 advocacy.wml
  --- openpkg-web/advocacy.wml  11 Aug 2004 09:26:41 -0000      1.3
  +++ openpkg-web/advocacy.wml  11 Aug 2004 15:37:20 -0000      1.4
  @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   
   <h1>Community Advocacy</h1>
   
  -Since OpenPKG became public in 2002, our world-wide community is
  +Since OpenPKG became public in 2002, our worldwide community is
   steadily growing. As of August 2004, we estimate it to approximately
   10.000 distinguished customers -- based on regular analysis of package
   downloads and mailing list subscriptions. Some of our customers
  @@ -69,8 +69,8 @@
       org-url="http://www.cis.ksu.edu/";>
       Deployment of the OpenPKG infrastructure on a fleet of Sun Solaris
       machines has allowed our organization to migrate away from a
  -    convoluted, out-of-date, shared NFS directory to cleanly managed and
  -    easily upgraded package system. This is light-years ahead of any
  +    convoluted, out of date, shared NFS directory to cleanly managed and
  +    easily upgraded package system. This is light years ahead of any
       vendor alternative from Sun.
   </advocacy>
   
  @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
       org-name="Code Fusion cc"
       org-url="http://www.codefusion.co.za/";>
       OpenPKG has proven itself time and time again as an excellent base
  -    for the Kolab e-mail server. Nowhere else can one deploy such a rich
  +    for the Kolab email server. Nowhere else can one deploy such a rich
       set of applications, so consistently, across so many different
       platforms. The ability to move between different UNIX platforms
       and GNU/Linux distributions while maintaining a consistent, high
  @@ -122,8 +122,8 @@
       org-url="">
       OpenPKG has brought new life to a somewhat deprecated version of
       FreeBSD I am running. It has managed to keep me up to date on all of
  -    the major services it provides without having to do a time-consuming
  -    full-system upgrade on a machine in a remote location. I was able
  +    the major services it provides without having to do a time consuming
  +    full system upgrade on a machine in a remote location. I was able
       to install and make OpenPKG completely functional from a remote
       terminal all in the course of a day (which included gazing through
       much of the documentation).
  @@ .
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