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Server: cvs.openpkg.org Name: Michael Schloh
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Module: openpkg-web Date: 11-Aug-2004 17:43:17
Branch: HEAD Handle: 2004081116431600
Modified files:
openpkg-web advocacy.wml
Log:
english usage and style
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--- openpkg-web/advocacy.wml 11 Aug 2004 15:37:20 -0000 1.4
+++ openpkg-web/advocacy.wml 11 Aug 2004 15:43:16 -0000 1.5
@@ -5,14 +5,13 @@
<h1>Community Advocacy</h1>
-Since OpenPKG became public in 2002, our worldwide community is
-steadily growing. As of August 2004, we estimate it to approximately
-10.000 distinguished customers -- based on regular analysis of package
-downloads and mailing list subscriptions. Some of our customers
-volunteered and gave <a href="feedback.html">feedback</a> as satisfied
-OpenPKG users. Those of them who provided a personal <i>Public Advocacy
-Statement</i> (see <a href="feedback.html">feedback</a> form) are quoted
-here.
+Since OpenPKG became public in 2002, the worldwide community has
+steadily grown. As of August 2004 there are approximately 10.000
+distinct customers based on regular analysis of package downloads
+and mailing list subscriptions. Some satisfied customers have given
+<a href="feedback.html">feedback</a>, providing a personal <i>Public
+Advocacy Statement</i> (see <a href="feedback.html">feedback</a> form)
+as shown here.
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table.quoting {
@@ -104,7 +103,7 @@
name="Bill Campbell"
org-name="Celestial Software LLC"
org-url="http://www.celestial.com/";>
- We are moving all our internal and customer's systems to OpenPKG which has
+ We are moving all our internal and customer systems to OpenPKG which has
simplified our development and support.
</advocacy>
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